Thread:FireTrainThomas01/@comment-1338865-20180415143736/@comment-1338865-20180415213853

Nice.

Here's more from my version:

Toby: I tried hard,

Narrator: Continued Toby,

Toby: But my old wheels ached. Edward understood.

Edward: It's my turn now!

Toby: He'd tell me. He was often short of steam, but he always struggled to a station, and then rested there.

Edward: I mustn't stop between stations.

Toby: He'd say.

Edward: The passengers wouldn't like it.

James: Humph!

Narrator: Huffed James. He had stopped on a viaduct and hadn't cared at all.

Toby: Passengers,

Narrator: Continued Toby,

Toby: Get cross if you stop at the wrong places. Edward stopped in a wrong place once, and this is what happened.

One wet and windy afternoon, when the rails were damp, Edward was traveling home with a full train; there were even passengers in the caboose.

It wasn't a comfortable ride at all.

Edward's wheels kept slipping, and it was a steep climb.

At last his wheels gripped the rails again.

Edward: The worst is over,

Toby: He thought,

Edward: Now we're away.

Toby: But they weren't.

Edward: Aaah! I've got a cramp!

Toby: He groaned.

And Edward stopped on the loneliest part of the line.

Also, if I was actually doing a parody video of this episode, I can imagine scenes from Edward's Exploit being used for the flashback of Rheneas. Just something I wanted to say.