Talk:Some expectations of street medics

While typing this up, I noticed it is a mess. I have fixed spelling errors and made it a little clearer through a few formatting changes (mostly toward the top of the page, I'm just focusing on getting the rest typed quick now). But it needs a lot of help.
 * There are lots of redundant or conflicting phrases. See especially Confidentiality. Also Consent.
 * The voice changes repeatedly from "they" to "you." Someone should choose one and edit for uniformity of voice.
 * Many phrases are long and obfuscating.
 * The formatting presents blocks of text that should be broken into paragraphs or bullet points.

Gobblehook 17:48, 30 November 2006 (UTC)